Saturday, January 28, 2012

Writing Assignment

Here is Natalie's contribution to writing class last week.  I didn't prompt the subject matter at all.  :)   While some of the writing structure and adjective/adverb choices could be stronger - the sentiment is what makes all those details fade into the realm of 'we'll get to that later...the important is already there'.  


by Natalie Faith

Charlotte is my little sister.  She is 3 months old and a little bit.  She has blue eyes and a LOT of wavy, dirty blond hair.  She is very cute and had heart surgery but her scar is healing quickly.  She has Down Syndrome and sticks out her tongue.  Her therapist comes and does exercises with Charlotte every two weeks.  The therapist's name is Lynn.  Charlotte eats, sleeps and other stuff.  I could never have asked for a better little sister.